Atlantes: Servant Rider (Ready!)

[Atlantes]

Rider



"Fate ye have bested, mocked, crushed, me beneath thine wheel, how now have thou devised? For what purpose am I fit to observe?"

[/color][/b][/color]: // Atlantes
OTHER ALIAS[/color]: // Sorcerer of The Steel Castle
CURRENT AGE[/color]: // Unknown, currently has the appearance of a young girl.
YEAR OF BIRTH[/color]: // Unknown, the age of paladins
GENDER[/color]: // Female
ALIGNMENT[/color]: // Chaotic Neutral
OCCUPATION[/color]: // Strangest Sorcerer
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Fierce Battle


Full Body


Casual 1


Casual 2


Casual 3


Defeated by Bradamante


Despair

HEIGHT

[/color]: // 5'0
WEIGHT[/color]: // 85 lbs
EYE COLOR[/color]: // Blue
HAIR COLOR[/color]: // Blue
PIERCINGS[/color]: // None
TATTOOS[/color]: // None
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES[/color]: // The beautiful all white combat outfit (armored robes) is a rather striking affair of a white cloak and strange ear protector thingies. The wings can either be decoration or just ignored.
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• Bitter
  
  • A self demeaning person who gave their all to save someone from foretold doom only to fail. Atlantes views the world as a cruel existence and all attempts at resisting fate futile. She desperately wants to be proven wrong.
  
  
• Dramatic
  
  • Atlantes is something of a poet at heart and is prone to overblown language, soliloquies, and speech of high emotion. One might notice her addressing concepts as characters or referring to others as characters as if in a story.
  
  
• Well Intentioned
  
  • Atlantes is three steps to the left of being a good person. Her actions while often intended for the greater good are so strange in execution that it lands right in neutral territory. Atlantes sought to preserve the life of Ruggiero and to accomplish that goal imprisoned him. To keep him entertained she kidnapped others to be permanent guests. To maintain the situation she fought others as a sentry.
  
  
• Intelligent
  
  • Though odd, Atlantes is a very intelligent sorcerer of great ability. She constructed The Enchanted Steel Castle through magic, tamed a hippogryph, and is able to read the incredibly complex Book of Fates.
  
  
• Determined
  
  • Atlantes is not someone who gives up on the what she feels must be done. Atlantes did not want to fight Bradamante but felt she had no choice. She knew she may of been hurting Ruggiero and others by what she was doing, but refused to let him die. It is this determination that allows her to still try even while believing it will not serve any good in the end.
  
  

LIKES

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Birds.

The Quiet Life.

Those pure of heart.

Those honest in their actions.

Stories.

Food.

Happy Endings.

DISLIKES[/color]: //

Fate.

Inevitability.

Bad things happening to good people.


STRENGTHS[/color]: // Possibly the strangest servant kit, highly versatile?
WEAKNESSES[/color]: // In combat Atlantes has accidentally turned out as a far weaker Medusa. High Reliance upon Noble Phantasms. Magic is weakened due to rider class rendering it not too effective. Mana inefficency seems to limit opperational time.
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MY LEGEND: //

[/color] Multiple versions of Orlando Furioso with minor changes in plot between them.


www.geneseo.edu/orlando_furioso/canto-4 (Summary)

www.sacred-texts.com/neu/orl/orl04.htm (Text)

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atlantes_%28Sorcerer%29 (Character blurb)


MY HISTORY[/color]: //



Once upon a time there was a Wizard, and this Wizard had a magic book. The book, you see, could tell the destiny of anyone anywhere and she often spent her days reading it.

This book was the only book for The Wizard and she loved to read about the day to day lives of those around her. She cried when the characters were sad, and laughed with joy at their every success.

One day, The Wizard chanced upon fate. Unfortunate twins, tragedy had stuck before they had even drawn first breath. A father betrayed, a mother dead from the exertion of giving birth to twins while escaping her country by boat, the children were abandoned and alone.

Setting out at once Atlantes arrived in almost no time at all, appearing before the sailors The Wizard ordered them to take the daughter and find a kind home, and she personally would raise the son.

The son's name was Ruggiero and Atlantes had foreseen tragic destinies within the child's future. The daughter Marfisa was to become a great warrior and apart would not be burdened by her brother's fate.

Taking the boy, The Wizard raised him in secret away from the world and loved him very much. With the boy, The Wizard had less time for her favorite book but didn't mind, and like this time continued until the boy grew into a handsome, chivalrous, and intelligent young man.

Seeing that the boy was lonely The Wizard worked tirelessly to supply the castle with guests; stolen from around the world. Like this the young man had friends and The Wizard fought tirelessly to defend this stagnant dream.

Fate does not sleep, and it does not rest. Insurmountable Fate brought Bradamante to Atlantes' steel gates one day. Determined, Atlantes rode out to battle once more: The Book of Fates in one hand, The reigns of her companion hippogryph and The Standstill Shield in the other.

Bradamante was a truly valiant warrior and Atlantes regretted the fact that it had come to blows, still Atlantes was sure she would not have to kill her. Atlantes had not yet had to take a life in the defense of her castle, she was confident that her prowess in combat was simply too strong to necessitate it.

The battle was a ferocious one lasting most of the day, finally, The Wizard nearing exhaustion unveiled her red silken cloth that served to bind her shield. The Knight instantly fell to the ground like all those who had come before. Atlantes was no valorous Knight, she knew this, her only goal was the perseverance of Ruggiero's life.

Atlantes had underestimated Bradamante, and Bradamante had accounted for this; having a ring that rended spells to nothing in her possession. Atlantes unguarded and far too close to the feigning Knight was soon entrapped. Besting her in strength Bradamante had sprung on The Wizard and subdued her, readying the final blow she soon stopped.

Bradamante was shocked at the youth of the waifish wizard. She did not feel right killing a child, and demanded to know why Atlantes had kidnapped and imprisoned people within the castle.

Atlantes bound by Bradamante and as shocked by her mercy as she was at discovering the Knight's gender; relented her tale of the child and of her long defense of his dream within the castle. She begged Bradamante to leave and promised Bradamante anything in her possession if she would simply leave them undisturbed.

The Knight was disgusted at the bribery and would not allow The Wizard to continue playing with the lives of others. The Knight demanded the ending of the spell immediately and The Wizard had no choice but to comply. As Atlantes undid the spell she also prepared a contingency plan, though she might die she refused to hand Ruggiero over to fate.

As the people were leaving the castle the hippogryph under Atlantes' orders and snatched up Ruggiero flew far far away. The Knight was furious but still did not desire to kill the child-like Wizard.

"Slay me! Say what you will! But i have staked my life on that one! Can't you see? Can't you see I am saving your husband's life?!"

fly away... above the very clouds if that will save you.

Leading the people to safety The Knight set out in search of the boy who was now a man.

The Wizard returned to her castle and once more opened her book. "Ruggiero" she said and pictured the youth's face.

The Book of Fates responded and like in the past, the boy's fate was laid out before The Wizard. She was pleased, his fate was still stuck in time. She never once imagined that the boy who had grown would have witnessed the battle, she never fathomed that he had fallen in love with The Knight revealed to be the most valiant of all women.

The Wizard stared at the lines as they branched and branched and intersected once more; more akin to a rippling pond then a page of text, the words swam across the open book in a chaotic dance. She was uncertain of time as it passed, rarely even allowing herself to blink.

"NO!"

DEATH.DEATH.DEATH.DEATH.DEATH.DEATH.DEATH.DEATH.


Atlantes threw the book in tears.

In moments she was using her magic to rush toward Ruggiero, she had not yet succeeded in rending him from his fate, she would have to try again.

Imprisoning him once more she was hurt by his protests, she never told him what she knew, and accepted his harsh words with a silent determination.

That attempt too would fail, one day while away from the newly constructed castle of sorcery she returned to find it undone and her charge gone.

Remembering Bradamante's valor she exiled herself once more and returned to her castle and book. She no longer ventured from the castle and every waking moment was spent in observance of fate. She prayed silently and slept rarely.

The Wizard saw The Boy's many valiant quests, she saw his friends, his trials, his love, and finally his marriage to The Knight.

Seven years later, he died, betrayed and progenitor to a great line of heroes.






MY GOALS[/color]: //

"Ch,but a puppet upon strings. What goals might i have? What am i to do other than accompany this mad dance; we like clowns upon the precipice of a cliff?"

[/color][/b][/color]: // Normal weapon is a chain that can also be used as an awesome belt.
NOBLE PHANTASM[/color]: //

Wings of War
Rank: B+
Type: Support, Mount
Range: Melee (attack, claw, bite, charge ram, ect.)
Max Targets: 1-3 if they happened to be rather close to one another.

A mount granted to The Sorcerer of The Steel Castle, A hippogryph mount like that which was ridden in legend. Enhances End and Agi by one plus modifier, the creature itself is capable of making attacks at the level of B+. The first mention of such a creature in legi-historical-literary history was ridden by Atlantes in Orlando Furioso.

At maximum mana and without expending prana elsewhere, the phantasmal beast can be kept out for roughly 30 minutes.

Now with pictures!

Standstill Shield
Rank: C
Type: Status Downer
Range: Dependent on the sight ability of the target. 1 Mile at most if a servant was even capable of seeing that far.
Max Targets: Indefinite

A shield ironically designed for offensive use. When the red silken shroud is removed, the shield is activated. Those who lay eyes upon the shield and possess hostile intent toward the wielder will be assaulted with a persistent paralysis curse.

Those with A rank Mana or Magic Resist are capable of resisting the curse completely, those with B will experience a 1 rank down in AGI, those with C in either ability will experience 2 ranks down, Finally anything reduced to what would be lower than E will suffer a half penalty on the E rank numerically (10 becomes 5). Non-Servant class existences will instead be completely disabled.

The Curse lasts 5 minutes and will refresh if the target manages to recurse themselves.

The shield is in effect until resealed. The shield is limited by prana, and if nothing else were in use, could be kept effecitve for 15 minutes.

Phantasmal Fortress: The Illusionary Steel Castle
Rank: C (The class of Rider has limited the applications.)
Type: Fortress
Range: Within sight to cast, walls can extend upwards to 100 Yards in either direction as needed.
Max Targets: Potentially anyone that interacts with(in) it.

Atlantes' greatest masterwork takes the form of a magical fortress that can also serve as a prison.

Barrier walls can be summoned (up to 3) to block attacks and function as standard fortress walls manifested as powerful barriers. The barriers carry the appearance of a swirling colors of light blue and pink. The barriers naturally consume prana from the area around them which can then be used to refund some of the cost to Atlantes.

When the three walls are created, connected, surrounding an opponent the true nature of this noble phantasm is revealed. Creating a bounded field within the walls with a dome above, prana is slowly eaten from those inside to create familiars. The familiars will then assault those inside relentlessly with projected phantom weaponry; all while carrying the appearance of Atlantes as perfect doppelgangers.

Slain familiars will violently explode in a flash of light as E rank attacks. The familiar's attacks themselves are unranked but their numbers make them dangerous.

The walls themselves true to their rank are effective defenses against Noble Phantasms of C rank or below, unless they are of the "Anti Fortress" functionality which would allow the barrier to only sustain up to a D rank Noble Phantasm with substantial damages sustained. The walls, however, are persistent and will regenerate over time.

Despite being ranked down due to being summoned as a Rider, this NP is still a signature spell and as such, carries the mark of its creator in its execution. Utilizing the full form of this NP will, in essence, reveal this servant's identity.

CLASS ABILITIES[/color]: //

Riding: B

All creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts.

Magic Resist: D

Cancel Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.


SKILLS[/color]: //


Eye of The Mind (False): B

An innate talent to sense and avoid danger based on intuition, that can also be called the Sixth Sense or prescience, gained through many ordeals and adventures. As a natural talent to avoid danger, it greatly differs from Eye of the Mind (True), which is danger avoidance that originates from “predictions augmented by experience”.

Even though Heracles’ sanity was lost due to Mad Enhancement, this skill remained effective as it is nearly an instinct. When crossing swords with a seasoned swordsman like Arturia, he would not fall for half-hearted feints. It is such a troublesome ability for Hercules’ opponents. Although monstrous in size, Hercules has a high rank in Agility. As a result, it is very difficult to corner him.

Magecraft: B

Capable of using orthodox Thaumaturgy. Atlantes is a specialist in illusions and mirages but is capable of other magecraft as well.


Guardian: A+

One who has found purpose in shielding others, offers a situational rank up in both END and AGI for the singular purpose of saving others.


Discernment: C

Someone who has observed a great many people's lives, demonstrates a higher than normal understanding of human nature.

This servant is able to better determine the characters of others and is also better able to see through lies, bluffs, and feints. Ineffective against those under the effects of mad enhancement or mental pollution.

This skill is the most effective against "archetypical" persona, or those of have revealed much about themselves.



PARAMETERS[/color]: //


STRENGTH[/color]: // D
ENDURANCE[/color]: //C ----> (B) +
AGILITY[/color]: //C ----> (B) +
MANA[/color]: //C
LUCK[/color]: //D
NOBLE PHANTASM[/color]: // B+
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[/color][/b][/color]: // Blundy
FACE CLAIM[/color]: // Nymph, Sora no Otoshimono
OTHER CHARACTERS[/color]: // Aporia, Melanie
MISC. INFORMATION[/color]: //

My history may be a bit confused... I don't know if I'm missing a part of the story, or if multiple versions are just colliding in my head. This is mainly in regards to Ruggiero which Wikipedia refers to being a part of events i never read about in the story... this is my interpretation to try and make sense of it all.
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[Atlantes]

"So begins our long, long upward climb...."

[Sola-Ui Nuada-Re Sophia-Ri]

Alright~ Lets begin~

History is acceptable, although I’m not the greatest expert on this particular story. Problem is in the description of your phantasms

Wings of War – What is ‘hitting like a B rank phantasm’? There is no strict definition of how hard a B rank phantasm hits, and if you mean just like a B ranked phantasmal say sword, which is based on the servant’s strength rank. So more description of how it does damage.

Standstill Shield – Lower the rank to C. Also, what happens if 2 ranks lower is worse than halving their agility stat? Or say someone has E agility, but receives the 2 ranks lower? Sooooo, more description again~

Book of Fates – An impossibility in a non-linear RP. Especially the future reading. While this would work in a story, it cannot work in a cooperative event that has no strict time limit to any day. I’m afraid I have to say no to both modes of this phantasm. Please rework it~

Magic Resist – Lower this a rank (Don’t hit yourself with your shield XD)

Eye of the Mind (True) – From what I can gather, you fit Eye of the Mind (Fake) better.

Highspeed Divine Words – Even as a Caster you would not have this. Highspeed Divine words are for those who talked with/to gods, or Casters from the age of gods. You, sadly, are not.

That should be it, although I suppose it is a lot of things on the mechanical end, sorry~

[Atlantes]

Ok before i get started i think i'll have to answer some of your questions with questions if you dont mind.

1) I basically changed attacking at the level of a B rank NP to just B+ strength attacks, that should be fine i imagine.

2) I've lowered the rank, but what i had meant was that if you have anything lower than C you suffer half rank numerically, that's in reference to this guy: images.wikia.com/typemoon/images/c/c4/Servantstats.jpg

However i may of made a mistake, i'm not sure if halving a stat numerically is always going to be a stronger effect than 2 ranks down ect?

- I did make a mistake, and am going to work on a way to rectify this.

I changed the wording so if someone would be reduced below E rank AGI it halves the E's numerical value but does no further reduction than that.

Regardless i didn't want it to just paralyze someone because they'd just plain be screwed and that wouldn't be very fun for anybody.

I've also added a duration of 5 minutes after being cursed that gets refreshed every time you meet the requirements to get cursed.


3) Yeah i see where you're coming from with the book of fates i'll replace that with the steel castle. ( I had planned on using the book as a rp fun tool and in combat like a really high rank instinct skill but it may still just be a pain.) The rank on this NP may be too high but it is supposed to be embalmic of this (anti)hero.

4) Lowered Magic Resist, i added a blurb in the shield to clarify that the hostile intent should be toward the person holding the shield. Atlantes shouldn't freeze herself unless she turns suicidal and stares at it =P



5) I think i prefer True for this character from what i can gather though i admit i don't understand either that well. True is more the strategist right? Do you have a good example of someone who uses Fake on this board that i can read? The wiki refers to Heracles~

- nobody seems to state what Fake EXACTLY does it seems wibbly wabbly

- After asking around some more i prefer true if thats okay with you, i think Atlantes doesn't even really qualify for fake since Bradamante tricked him pretty easily by playing dead with a magic immune ring.


6) Words is just magecraft now.




No worries this shouldn't be much work at all once i know how i should go about tackling it.

[Sola-Ui Nuada-Re Sophia-Ri]

Standstill shield needs a maximum range, not just dependant on the sight ability. In addition it is still missing whether this is durational (You pull it off, and anyone who looks at it for such and such a time gets cursed), or a one-time shot (Less prana usage, potentially less effective.)

“and are able to even absorb prana from blocked attacks, which can then be used to refund some of the cost to Atlantes.”

Actually this is an impossibility. Fireballs, for example, are not a ball of fire prana. It is a replicated miracle, formed against the world’s will –by- the prana. It’s like saying you can deflect a baseball hard enough that the pitcher’s hands will become your hands. Same thing with recycling familiars. Also this does need to go down a rank, as it is not quite the level of an A rank fortress type phantasm really.

Getting tricked is really what would keep one from getting EotM True. It’s also a ‘loser’s’ skill, one who is behind others and relies on only their knowledge to push them ahead in combat. EotM fake is just a natural ability to do EotM True, however you lose some of the insight in it. Realistically, for someone gifted with powers like Atlantes is, Fake suits her more.

In addition… where does Guardian come from? I… would like to see the event relating to this. At least comparable to what I would imagine St. George level protection, as this skill is incredibly powerful, and technically vague (When are you protecting your master by fighting/when are you not?)

[Atlantes]

1) I gave the range one mile because somebody literally never engages Atlantes in the story and still falls over paralyzed from quite far off.

-It is now clarified as having a duration until resealed, that's what i had meant by persistent curse.

2) Removed that quote but did not remove eating prana from the environment, if thats not okay i can remove that too, was going for a blood fort adromeda feel, just to keep the accidental medusa fangirl dream alive. Atlantes' should have a stronger effect but be far less adept at being a prana generator.

-Ranked it down, booya

-Removed recycled familiars

3) I'll just take your word for it, i used the quote from the wiki because i think it is far better than the one on this website. Fake it is.

4) Guardian does not come from a specific event but from the nature of having one's sole purpose in life being the defense of another at all costs. In this case it is trying to fight fate to save the life of Ruggiero and all that Atlantes did to attempt to achieve that goal even becoming the villain. (Not just my spin on the story either, I really don't feel Atlantes is a bad person within the original work either.)

-As for the skill itself yes it is very powerful but also very very niche, the skill should only activate in those kind of Hollywood secret service moments where this servant would dive in front of an attack to save another person or to grab them before falling off a building ect.

-It would not, for instance, be considered protection to fight on the behalf of another. What chu chu did when deflecting the gate of baby in the anime and i assume the VA as well would trigger it. It's a skill for saving others from attacks and situations.

- If it helps it should work like a disengage to swoop in and either body block an attack for someone else, or to grab them out of danger, and then it would deactivate.

- Saint George is the Patron Saint of England and defender of Christianity, and devoted his entire life towards that goal, Atlantes devoted (his) her whole life to the defense of Ruggiero.

- I think in both instances the skill reflects the very nature of these servants.




I think that should be everything, let me know if i forgot to edit something that i said i did. Pretty sure i got it all though~


PS: Is discernment even necessary with Eye o' the mind faker? I am sensing an overlap.

[Sola-Ui Nuada-Re Sophia-Ri]

Discernment covers different situations. There might be a tiny bit of overlap say if someone was lying to cover a strike, but otherwise they are still two different skills.

And alright, I am fine with guardian if it is really only active temporarily like that.

Finally, for the thing keeping you from being approved at the moment, the shield needs a limitation of how long it can be unsealed, and a strict one, as the debuff is incredibly powerful.

[Atlantes]

I've given the shield a 15 minute limiter before draining Atlantes completely of prana, while this may seem high, considering the mount, and the fortress, and her lack of efficent attacks due to low str i doubt she'll be able to make use of any one thing for very long at all.

In fact, i added mana inefficency to her weakness list.

hopefully this blundy has allayed concerns.

[Sola-Ui Nuada-Re Sophia-Ri]

[Atlantes]

Time never stands still...

[Atlantes]

Upon approval this profile is to take jason's rider slot and serve under Baki in secondus.

[Cu Chulainn]

Riding:

Well, from what I gather you aren't especially frontline-cavalry nor famed for your riding skill, so the A-ranking feels quite jarring. Not to mention that in you imply that the Hippogrif does all the work on fighting and such. Think B-rank is enough for you to tame a Hippogrif, a half-phantasmal beast of such.

Magic Res:

Any anti-magic res artifact/protection or something that sets you apart from the masses or justify you surpassing a spirit almost 1000 years older like Iskandar in magi res? If not maybe D-rank is more appropriate.

Wings of War:

B-rank phantasm means B-rank attacks, lower the hippogrif attacks to that rank.

Fortress:

Standard Procedure of defensive phantasms (and offensive too, I guess): Detail how strong the shield is and how powerful the familiar explosion is. Probably not anything overwhelming since you're pretty close of making this phantasm a shield that can spawn exploding familiar illusion zombies.

[Atlantes]

Riding: I wasn't too sure where to go with this originally, but i ended up picking A because "This qualifies you for the riding class" was included in the description. I don't mind having B or anything, but is it conceivable that the grail might of boosted Atlantes to make her fit the class?

As for the hypogryph it is "directed" or "driven" much akin to Medusa's piloting of Pegasus.

Magic Res: Atlantes only has being a magus as a somewhat justifier for magic res so sure i'll drop it.

Wings of War: May i just up the NP's rank then? It seems rather underwhelming for such a majestic beast of a NP under a rider to simply get beat up by a servant with B power especially for its prana costs. Of course i don't really understand myself what a B rank attack means exactly.

Fortress: Sure i'll add some detail to it, let me know if its too little or too much.

PS: Thanks for getting to me; i was worried i might of become invisible!

[Herakles]

>Quote about self in profile
Das praise.

Taking over the eval sice the dog is busy.

Riding:
Not exactly how it works. While stats and abilities can fluctuate being lowered or seemingly raised, any boosting of stats is an illusion. The servant system is watering down a heroic spirit so that it can be summoned to the world. You stick the soul in a template known as a servant class. While stats or magic resistance might be higher or lower if they were a archer or berserker, the changes exist only because the class is restricting their ability to differing degrees. The grail doesn't realy boost anything let alone the primary reason why you qualified for the class. The only time I could think of something being "boosted" woul be how vlad became a monster based on corruptions of his legend in extra...which uses a different system entirely.

T/n: Lower it to B and ignore the flavor text from wiki. You'll qualify for class even if you don't have A.

Wings of war:
To start lets explain how noble phantasm attacks work. A C rank noble phantasm' attack equals an A rank regular attack in sheer force. This is the standard which ignores how not all np work based on sheer force. So lets say Ajax attacks Perseus and pretend Harpe is a brute force np. Percy activates brute force harpy and mets the attack, both blows get repelled. Now, normal attacks are based around strength which shows how much force a servant can muster with a full power swing. See the difference? This means a B rank str servant isn't going to be punching ot your hippogrif they will need to counter with a NP of their own.

Having a B rank np that does B+ attacks is a no. That rank reflects the total strength of the np. If it is a B+ np it better not be labeled B rank. That said since you are a rider I don't mind you bumping this to B+ when charging with the mount.

Steel Castle:
Not really happy with you having this NP which fits you more if you were a caster than a rider. Getting back to how servant classes work some NP don't appear outside of a class or are weakend in effect if they do. It doesn't really make sense for a rider to have a caster based np at full power than it would a caster having a full power mount...

I'm fine with the familiar attacks as is but I would say either lower the rank or alter the descriptions of how resisting works.

[Atlantes]

First thanks for the really informative lesson lurkie it helped a lot!

1) Riding down to B then and i'll just remove that flavor text that.

2) I've bumped the NP up to B+ then as I requested. Should i make a note that this is situational for a full scale charge or...?

3) NP stat raised to B+ to correctly reflect Wings of War.

4) As for the steel castle i'll edit this when i've figured out what to do with it. I understand that my servant's a weird one.

EDIT: Ok i've changed quite a bit around lets see if i can get the full list.

A) The NP has been ranked down.

B) The mental influences have just plain been removed, they would be awkward/lame in a rp setting anyhow, if Atlantes discovers someone's identity she can just use magecraft to try that ploy anyhow as a test of character or who knows? (/drama)

C) The full/true use of the NP now reveals Atlantes' identity which honestly only makes sense and should've probably been there in the first place.

D) I've put that the walls have a kind of regeneration/self repair effect to them but didn't specify exactly how powerful this was. This should keep the NP a threat despite its power level but still allow it to be relatively escape-able and not an instant "bad end".


Thanks for being a hero and taking over, let me know what you think.

[Herakles]

Only thing I'd add is the situational charge but it is in the thread now, and I feel you've waited long enough. Excelsior!