Battousai the Manslayer - Servant Assassin

[Herakles]

Denied.

Please take the time to read the rules for character creation. You'll see in there a rule for no obviously fictional characters. Which this clearly falls under. Thank you.

[katapeltes]

Actually, if you actually read the legend of the character you will find out it ain't a fake. Of course Kenshin was the inspiration, but I don't see why that should influence the character itself. Of course, if it still cannot be approved, then...

[Herakles]

Yes, Kawakami Gensai was indeed an actual person. The historical figure that the mangaka took inspiration from. However, Kenshin Himura is most certainly a fictional character. While it might be possible for you to make a servant assassin Kawakami Gensai, Kenshin Himura is most definitely out of consideration.

[katapeltes]

Changes have been made, everything should be ok now.

[Herakles]

...Right. I'm on extro so this will not be an evaluation. You'll need another mod for that. However you have copy pasted wikipedia exactly for your history. A link is acceptable to wikipedia, however only for legend. The history is an roleplay sample from you to us. Showing us that you can roleplay to standard here. This profile as is, is completely unacceptable. It has absolutely nothing to do with Kawakami Gensai. It is a blatant rip from Rurouni Kenshin which will not be accepted. A profile done on Kawakami Gensai, needs to be based on Gensai. Not on a fictional character that took very light inspiration from the character.

If you don't understand my meaning, allow me to clarify.

Go read the rules. In their entirety. Carefully read the character pointers thread, and the profile template thread itself.

For reference, try looking at approved profiles and compare them to your own. Please do not bump for approval again until you have completely reworked the profile and done as asked.

Edit: As a side note, look to the left side of the forums. Scroll down until you find the chat boxes. Try going to those, our members should be able to help you out in more detail if you are confused. A good number are online at the moment. Thank you.